Do you care? #poem

Watching a drowning person, when you stood on land,
He’s gone into the sand, needed your hand and you put em in pant?!

Hearing a loud cry on the other side of the road,
You closed your eyes, said, there’s no other side of the road?!

A breaking heart you could’ve saved but, you saw it apart heard it break,
Pretend you have no ears, you did not hear it break

Oh, you a broke already? For ’em it seems easy to break you again,
He’s kicked and is badged “loser” he’s consumed by pain

A woman weeped, “dont touch my untouched skin”.
Now its her body’s that’s touched, you couldn’t touch her soul, its pure, its pristine, its undamaged and its virgin

When, no broke, no raped woman, no dying man, no tears you helped!
You’ve got nerve to say you care, you’re hurt, really alot of nerve.


19 thoughts on “Do you care? #poem

  1. Sounds like a breakup poem. That moment when you think they’re your best friend, that one person you never thought you’d ever find. Then they go and break your heart, and it leaves you with one never ending question running through your mind – “Do you care?”….
    Hmmm… ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

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  2. Thanks for visiting my page. Your poem needs some editing in terms of grammar but the emotion is felt. My interpretation is that this poem is intended to open people’s eyes when it comes to helping one another. My main interpretation is that many do not help even when they hear someone asking for a lending hand. Example, victims of rape.


    1. Wow! Thank you so much for such pleasing words :* thank you very much! Well, you can express, just feel it and you’ll want to write it ๐Ÿ™‚ & this is very meaningful comment for me โ™กโ™กโ™ก love to you.


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