Watching a drowning person, when you stood on land,
He’s gone into the sand, needed your hand and you put em in pant?!
Hearing a loud cry on the other side of the road,
You closed your eyes, said, there’s no other side of the road?!
A breaking heart you could’ve saved but, you saw it apart heard it break,
Pretend you have no ears, you did not hear it break
Oh, you a broke already? For ’em it seems easy to break you again,
He’s kicked and is badged “loser” he’s consumed by pain
A woman weeped, “dont touch my untouched skin”.
Now its her body’s that’s touched, you couldn’t touch her soul, its pure, its pristine, its undamaged and its virgin
When, no broke, no raped woman, no dying man, no tears you helped!
You’ve got nerve to say you care, you’re hurt, really alot of nerve.
Sounds like a breakup poem. That moment when you think they’re your best friend, that one person you never thought you’d ever find. Then they go and break your heart, and it leaves you with one never ending question running through your mind – “Do you care?”….
Hmmm… ๐ฆ
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Ashton! thank you for reading it ๐
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hi! thanks for visiting my site:) nice poem! you should write something in your about page:)
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Thank you! I sure will ๐
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HI, Thank you for visiting my little blog! Really like your poem!
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You are welcome! ๐ and thank you
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Thanks for visiting my page. Your poem needs some editing in terms of grammar but the emotion is felt. My interpretation is that this poem is intended to open people’s eyes when it comes to helping one another. My main interpretation is that many do not help even when they hear someone asking for a lending hand. Example, victims of rape.
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Thank you for reviewing my poem! I’ll surely update my poem sooner ๐ thank you very much!
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Straight from the heart! Keep up your good word.
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This Thank You is straight from the heart too โก
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deep and powerful……..you are right…….if those things ca not extract any action emotion…….then it is not others who need help…. ๐ ๐
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I respect your perception for my poem its appreciateable ๐ thank you so very much for your lovely visit on my blog. My love to your blog โกโก
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Aww thank you and my absolute pleasure…….!!! ๐ ๐
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you! ๐
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Your work is amazing ๐ I wish I could write and express myself the way you do ๐ keep it up, I love reading your stuff ๐
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Wow! Thank you so much for such pleasing words :* thank you very much! Well, you can express, just feel it and you’ll want to write it ๐ & this is very meaningful comment for me โกโกโก love to you.
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A beautiful poem, and a beautiful song. Thank you for sharing.
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A beautiful poem, a beautiful song and then, more beautiful comment of yours โก Thank You!
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