We spent years together in row,
Showing love, care, help each other grow
Like universe was the proof,
To rest and settle we were each other’s roof
My heart ached, she cried
Her soul hurt, lil I died
I needed her like wound needs to heal,
She wanted me like dead soul wants to feel
I saw her in my every tomorrow,
She made me her present, it killed everyday’s sorrow
We were afarid of our beautiful things to end,
When people said everything has an end
Somehow we knew, our things will last
But even the soul leaves the body at last!
Beautiful!
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My pleasure! Thank you
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Her soul hurt,lil i died..wow..
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Hey there, thank you for reading it completly and pointing out verse which you liked π
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This is so precise and beautiful π―
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Things like this keeps a blogger going. Thank you very much π
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Poetry is not in the meaning of the words but it’s true beauty lies in the way the words are put together. And you put them together really uniquely.
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You’ve put your words really uniquely too to appreciate my poem π thank you very much for this
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That was a beautiful poem!
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This is a beautiful comment! Thank you for reading my poem! π love to you β‘
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Love the way you use pronouns to show the exchange of emotions.
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Thank you β‘
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lovely β€
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Thank you :* π
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This is something I was looking for. You have done a great job π God bless you!
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Thank you very much! π yes, god’s helping me meet beautiful people like you β‘ thank you!
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Aww! Love and hugs to you. Xox π
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Beautiful poem. “I saw her in my every tomorrow” is a great line.
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Thank you Martin β‘ π
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Amazing! =)
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Thank you :*
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